Research Essay Planning WorksheetWrite a topic sentence for each topic and punctuate the points to complete the planTopic: The NSW Government's Response to Victims caused by the "king's blows" is not up to what is required. Do you agree? Sources of the introduction Basic information: "King hit" = sudden knockout blow / hitting someone suddenly and hard. Most of the time the attackers are unmotivated and under the influence of alcohol. Newcastle is first to implement alcohol ban and restriction laws. Mass media attention around the cause. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Thesis statement and outline: The government's response regarding the victims of the "king hit" attacks falls short of what is required and does not represent an adequate solution to the problem at hand. This essay will discuss the effectiveness of current lockout laws, alcohol restriction, and punishments meted out to offenders by the courts. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxProblem/Idea 1 SourcesTopic - Topic sentence (controlling idea): How can the government force users to take to the streets at 1:30 am and expect there to be no problems? Last entry at 1.30am and last drink at 3am is the current "band-aid" solution that the Australian government believes will curb the amount of alcohol-fueled violence, mainly one-punch attacks, which plagues the city's nightlife.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxSupporting sentences (explanations, examples, evidence)Effects every major establishment from Kings Cross, Cockle Bay, The Rocks, Haymarket and Darlinghurst. Casinos and Barangaroo exempt. According to The Australian (2014) the Newcastle model of lockout laws saw a 50% drop in night-time street crime and a 26% decrease in injuries related to emergency room admissions. Starting from July 2013, outside the... middle of paper... it therefore served to put the city's nightlife and economy to the test. Concluding Sources Rephrase the thesis statement differently: The NSW Government's current response to King's Stroke casualties does not solve the problem; in some cases, it promotes violence. Restate the main ideas that support your argument: Lockout laws and alcohol restrictions frustrate citizens and even push some of them to commit dangerous and violent acts. Conclude using a general statement ( referring to future implications, suggestions or recommendations, etc.): The current statistics, although showing a decrease in attacks, still demonstrate that this problem will not go away anytime soon and that the government is opting for the 'band-aid' solution rather than going deeper the question and find the best possible solution to a problem that affects our roads.