It means she has to make a love match by a specific date, otherwise she gets demoted or loses her job. Or he has to save someone before they are killed or the cure is lost. Right now, there are simply too many plots, but no clear focus or objective. This creates a fragmented structure. Remember, an important goal and show Mary pursuing that goal. Also, be sure to define what is at stake or at risk for Mary if she does not achieve her goal. For example, if he fails to save one doctor, everyone will die of cancer (just a hint). If she fails to create a loving marriage, that person will live life alone and Mary will feel like a failure. Make it clear that if Mary doesn't reach her goal, she could be fired, demoted, or hurt, etc. Credibility is a concern. As stated, it's hard to really understand how blowing things up makes people happy, how it makes them fall in love, and how blowing things up fixes everything. This doesn't seem credible. The ending with Mary becoming president of the United States and becoming the cure for cancer, unfortunately, is once again not convincing. The story needs more