The class broke into groups of four and edited each other's drafts. The activity was an eye-opening experience because their comments on my essay helped me as I created the final rewrite. Many comments were positive and highlighted that the structure, organization and examples provided were well done and thought out. This feedback gave me a sense of satisfaction with my essay. I was grateful that one of the reviewers pointed out that the thesis was missing at the end of the first paragraph. The thesis I constructed was placed at the beginning of the first paragraph. I rearranged my sentences and added a proper introduction to correct the structure of the essay. Assembly took a little time, but I'm happy with the end result. Without the peer review process I would not have noticed this serious error. With future essays I will turn to my classmates for advice because it is helpful to hear feedback from other points of view. I will take every comment I receive into consideration, knowing that working on it will allow me to produce superior quality